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Thursday, August 9, 2018

my star wars writing

my star wars writing
Star Wars "A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away". Main characters include Yoda, Darth vader,  Darth maul, Qigong gen, Obi Wan Kenobi, Luke Skywalker, Anakin Skywalker, Mace windu, Chewie, Han solo, Lando, General grievous, Snoke and Kylo Ren. Side characters like the Droid Army, Stormtroopers, Wookies. There are also the Republic and the Empire, First Order and the Rebels. All the star wars movies can be named, 1. The Phantom Menace, 2. Attack of the Clones, 3. Revenge of the sith, 4. A New Hope, 5. The empire strikes back, 6. Return of the Jedi, 7. The Force Awakens, 8. The Last Jedi.
               There are extras of Star wars like Star wars Rogue One and Solo a star wars story. The Solo Story goes before movie 1. Rogue One is in between movie 3 and movie 4. I can think of two jokes, ‘WHY DID KYLO REN CROSS THE ROAD’ TO GET TO- THE DARK SIDE’, and, ‘WHAT’S FOR DINNER DAD’ -‘WOKIE STEW’ ‘TASTE ANY GOOD’ ‘IT’S A BIT CHEWY’.
              It start episode 1 the Phantom Menace
The jedi encounter a very annoying GunGin Jajabinx
Going through a pod race with a young boy and having to fight a sith lord Darth Maul. The best one is Solo, a Star Wars story, starring Han Solo and Chewbacca and Lando Calrissian. Fun fact-Chewy is a wookie that is 190 years old. WOW!!!isn’t that interesting. Star wars is an very important part of childhood especially my childhood it was the first thing that loved to watch i would watch it all the time.

2 comments:

  1. Kia Ora Dylan, i’m Hamish from marshland school. I really like your Star wars jokes, and all my friends love them too. It makes me think about my massive lego star wars collection at home. I liked the way you explained the places and timelines of all the movies, and i also didn't know the chewy was 190 years old!
    Next time, maybe add a bit more punctuation in your star wars writing.

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  2. Hi Dylan. I really liked your Star Wars writing. I am a Star Wars fan too . It reminds me of the big space ships . I liked the way you used capital letters to make your writing more interesting . Perhaps you could check your punctuation as some of the character names didn't have capital letters at the start .

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