Kia ora, I am a student at Parkview Pārua School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, July 2, 2018
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Very good keep trying your best on your blog
ReplyDeleteHi Dylan my name is Billy from marshland school the playground ideas are amazing I like option 2 I think it would be cool for your school I am amazed by it because of the big hut. You could make a bigger rocket. I also like the way you lade it out. Next time you could add a anding maybe. When will it be done. Thanks Dylan
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